User:DeAnnaHalcom/sandbox

SA #25

1. What stub did you choose? Why did you choose this one? Copy and past the URL link into your Sandbox

Hill Correctional Center

2. How do you know that it's a stub: Identify where on the page that you know that this is a stub

I know this is a stub because I found it in the stubs timeline, and there is a max amount of two sentences within the article.

3. What are some missing or under-developed parts of this stub? A good way to determine this is to compare your stub to a more developed article on the same topic and category. So for example, if you chose a stub-article on a horror novel, look for another Wikipedia article on another horror novel that is more fully developed. What is missing on your stub page in comparison? You should devote 4-5 sentences to answering this question.

There is only one reference and there is very little information about the corrections facility. There are only two sentences for the entire article so there needs to be some elaboration on that end. Another thing that is lacking is information about the history or construction of the building. Another under-developed section of this article is if there were any famous inmates and if the inmates are treated fairly within the facility. Lastly, there could be a reference to if the facility had any large purchases or if the state made any improvements to the building.

4. In particular, locate the "References" section of the stub. What, if anything, is listed in the references? If the references are hyperlinked, do the links still work?

There is only one reference for this article and it's a direct link to the official website for the corrections facility. The reference is hyperlinked, and it does still work.

5. And, when you compare this stub to a well-developed article of the same category type, what sections of the overall article are present, and what are missing?

Overall, there is very little information present about this facility, only a couple sentences about some basic facts. There are many missing sections with this article including history, any closures of lockdowns, and any notable inmates.

From Dr. Hildebrandt: Great job on this (SA #25) and also SA #24. I think you are in good shape to potentially choose an article to improve.

SA#26

Architecture (Edit)
Paul Ha, the director of the museum, had an idea of trends he wished to display but didn't plan on which exhibits/collections he wanted to show case, so the architects had little to no idea on what type of spaces to create. The architects came up with a plan to create a space that is able to convey its own energy and calm feelings. With a budget of $6.5 million, the architects and director worked together to create a rather bland structure, the reason for this being that Paul Ha wished for artists to be able to use all areas of the museum to display their work. Local architects questioned the design by claiming that it looked too much like a fortress with little to no indication of original design. From Dr. Hildebrandt: Good job with this one, DeAnna