User:DeLandNebbb/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Guard (gridiron football)
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead is striaght to the point. The content in this article seems on topic and doesn't distract the reader with any information that might not be relevant. It is as neutral as it gets there are no biases and no claims in this arctile just straight facts and and all the claims have citations with them. The refrences are reliable but I am worried that there are only 2 sources which is not that much. I think that there are more sub categories to add as their are different types of guards in football.


 * Sources
 * https://throwdeeppublishing.com/blogs/football-glossary/what-is-an-offensive-guard-in-football#:~:text=Offensive%20guards%20must%20use%20a,a%20different%20and%20unique%20fashion.
 * Goes more in depth of what a guard is and why they are important
 * https://footballadvantage.com/offensive-line-positions/
 * Goes more into what they do and tendcies

Option 2

 * 2001 Oakland Raiders season
 * Article Evaluation
 * Its kind of a skeleton of an article and doesn't really give stats that much. The article's content are on topic but it does seem that it is some what biased against the Raiders but just one of that and no more. All claims have citations but the article only has one scoure so I am a little bit hesitant on the reliability of this article. I think they need to add more scources and also add stats to the games.


 * Sources
 * https://www.footballdb.com/teams/nfl/oakland-raiders/results/2001
 * more stats on raiders

Option 3

 * Article title
 * General manager (American football)


 * Article Evaluation
 * The contents of the article are relevant to the topic and the articles are written neutrally but there are somet things that are left out that I oculd put in. THe articles are are kind of suspect like one of them is How to become a general manager. I think if you add more reliable sources and more citations I think it would be fine


 * Sources
 * https://bleacherreport.com/articles/1666258-what-exactly-does-each-member-of-a-teams-front-office-do
 * https://www.rookieroad.com/football/team-staff/general-manager/
 * explains more on what goes on being a general manager

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Kai Sotto


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is very detailed about his life but it seems like some information missing from his modern life. But the sections on his life is pretty good. All of the content is on topic and has no biases and completely neutral The citiaions back up the claim and also are reliable when I check. The only thing I would add is his life in the nba even if it was only in the preseason and also an updated version of his picture.


 * Sources
 * https://www.si.com/nba/magic/news/orlando-magic-kai-sotto-summer-league-portland-trail-blazers-filipino
 * https://olympics.com/en/athletes/kai-sotto

Article title

 * Echo Lake (California)


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article isn't very detailed just main information but there isn't nothing really there not even why it is called echo lake. no sections no nothing. Maybe there isn't anyhting else to add. To be honest everything needs to to be reworked the contents and lead especially. Even in the location Echo Lake there really isn't detailed no hisstory or anything. no sections. I think to help this is to just start a whole new one or work from the skeleton and add alot more like history and stuff.


 * Sources
 * https://echolakenews.org/echo-lakes-history/
 * https://wildlife.ca.gov/Science-Institute/News/cdfw-creating-lahontan-cutthroat-trout-sport-fishery-at-echo-lake

Article Title
Terron Beckham

Article Evaluation

I think this article has noblity because he was a former NFL player and now is a youtuber also his brother is really famous. There is a lot I can write about and also there are a bunch of sources. He has a bunch of sources on him so I think that I can find something about each of his life sections.

sources

https://bleacherreport.com/articles/2628955-the-other-beckham-objs-cousin-chasing-improbable-odds-of-an-nfl-career

https://www.linkedin.com/in/terron-beckham-901540162/

Option 7
Article Title

Tua Tagovailoa concussion controversy

Article Eval.

This article has nobility because after this game it was all over the news and it was a factor of getting help with concussion injuries and also it was on the requested article section. Finding articles for this might be difficult because its a controversy but I did found out a lot of information.

Sources

[https://abcnews.go.com/Sports/nfl-fire-concussion-protocol-tua-tagovailoas-back-back/story?id=90918691#:~:text=The%20quarterback%20was%20seen%20stumbling,concussion%20protocol%20after%20the%20game. https://abcnews.go.com/Sports/nfl-fire-concussion-protocol-tua-tagovailoas-back-back/story?id=90918691#:~:text=The%20quarterback%20was%20seen%20stumbling,concussion%20protocol%20after%20the%20game.]

https://www.npr.org/2022/10/13/1128524103/nfl-concussion-latest

https://www.si.com/nfl/bills/news/tua-tagovailoa-nfl-doctor-fired-miami-dolphins-concussion-controversy-buffalo-bills-bengals-hits

https://www.sportingnews.com/us/nfl/news/tua-tagovailoa-concussion-week-3-dolphins-bills/in0yyd86o2oymmv01mdxqhwm

Option 8

 * Butt Punt

Article Eval.

Article has nobility because it was one of the most embarrising moments in the NFL as was the butt fumble and I feel like I can write something about this. There is a lot of sources with this one as it was popular when it happened and also there are articles about when where and how

Sources

https://www.si.com/nfl/2022/09/28/dolphins-butt-punt-stat-change

https://www.sportingnews.com/us/nfl/news/thomas-morstead-butt-punt-fantasy-rescore/khhrlg1y4kp27pjznlzrb7hk

https://www.cbssports.com/nfl/news/infamous-butt-punt-changed-from-block-to-punt-for-minus-one-yard-causing-fantasy-football-scoring-revisions/

https://ftw.usatoday.com/lists/dolphins-bills-butt-punt-thomas-morstead-safety-embarrassing