User:DeLandNebbb/Terron Beckham/Pattenjj234 Peer Review

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Lead: The lead has updated and accurate information. The only faulted here for the lead is just more information. A longer and more indepth lead could help to introduce your topic better and offer a summary of all the information put into the body and content of the page. The lead is a great summary of who Terron Beckham is and doesn't include any confusing information.

Content: The organization offered on your page is done very well. The different topics included for Beckham are clear and concise. There is no confusing details or information offered that doesn't have to do with the topic or headers. The chart added under "Pro Football Career" is such a creative idea and helps the reader understand Beckham's stats. It offers more information in a very clear way offering a visual aid. I would suggest adding in another visual aid, a picture of Beckham or him participating in his sports. The content is super neutral. There is no narrative added about Beckham that goes either way, just offering unbiased information about him. The sources added are accurate and reliable. The amount of sources included are great amount. Almost every sentence is backed up and a source is included. One thing to add more to is the "Other Sports" section. Keep going and add more details. As well as to the "Content Creation" section. I would add more to this section and solidify that section with more information on Beckham's YouTube persona. Additionally, add more details on the movie he starred in. Adding in details on what parts of the documentary he was in.

References:

The references are one of the highlights of your article page. There are so many and this adds so much to your article page. Having 16 different sources to pull information from is so important for your article and you excepted it perfectly! Amazing job with this part of the article.