User:DeLawZiuzia/Prior-appropriation water rights/Jnasiri Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DeLawZiuzia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DeLawZiuzia/Prior-appropriation_water_rights?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prior-appropriation water rights

Evaluate the drafted changes
I appreciated the Lead noting that all of your changes were bolded. In terms of the actual changes, all of your additions appear relevant and well-placed in this existing article. For instance, your update to the fourth paragraph under Details added a strong ending to the paragraph, as well as interesting new details regarding prior-appropriation during times of water shortage. Your additions in the Prior appropriation adoptions area also strengthened this section by offering citations to actual statutes and regulations closely tied to the existing text. Your citations also look good, and all the links that I checked worked well. My only suggestion for improvement would be to possibly add more information regarding climate change in the Details section. This seems like an interesting and timely point that you made about climate change, and more information on that point would further strengthen the article.