User:DeLawZiuzia/Prior-appropriation water rights/SLW012 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DeLawZiuzia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DeLawZiuzia/Prior-appropriation_water_rights?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prior-appropriation water rights

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the changes made to this document are very relevant and provide important additional information.

Under the "Article Body" section, you introduce the concept of prior appropriation and use the term "senior users." I think it might be beneficial to incorporate a sentence which defines a "senior user" because it seems to be a term of art. At a later point in the article, the term "senior appropriator" is used and defined, which I'm assuming is the same thing, but it may be helpful to either use consistent language or show that they are the same.

The sentence "Climate change is starting to play a role in diminishing water rights." feels a bit abrupt with the rest of the paragraph. It is super relevant and an important point, but it may be helpful to put it before the previous sentence.