User:DeVeggie314/Ocmulgee shiner/C.diabolis Peer Review

General info
DeVeggie314
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DeVeggie314/Ocmulgee_shiner?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ocmulgee shiner

Evaluate the drafted changes
'''General comments, feedback, or questions: You have done an excellent job at paraphrasing, which is so difficult to do without plagiarism. Trying to steer clear of plagiarism can sometimes make our sentences lose their context. I have added some of these sentences into the improvements section that I think would be beneficial to change/ make into two sentences. Do not be afraid of wordiness when discussing in detail!'''