User:Deasiacohen/Adoption and Safe Families Act/Abro2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Deasiacohen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Adoption and Safe Families Act
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Adoption and Safe Families Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content is well written but a pointer would be that some words are difficult to read. For example, at the start of the paragraph Background and Passage it states, "ASFA was enacted in an attempt to correct problems inherent within the foster care system that deterred the adoption of children with special needs." It is a good sentence but for certain viewers, words like "deterred" might be hard to understand. The article is well organized. For example, major provisions and tactics. The bullet points are good for organization. In regards to the references, I went through every reference and they are still available to view which is a good thing. I would add more to the Impact paragraph, it has not been updated since November 2020. Also, there is no images, you could add some images. Overall, the article looks good, there are small changes that need to be done. It was a good addition to add to Incentives for Providing Permanent Families for Children. I like the part where special needs children receive state issued health insurance.