User:Deasiacohen/Adoption and Safe Families Act/Devinyousif Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Deasiacohen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Adoption and Safe Families Act


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Adoption and Safe Families Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
There isn't much added to this sandbox draft of this article except for the titles of the bill itself. I would a information about the bill, include hearings, sponsors, political party of the bill, etc. The most important thing that the author can do to improve the article is add information about the certain bill and go in depth with it explaining to the reader what the bill is about and how it came to become a bill.