User:Deasiacohen/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Adoption and Safe Families Act

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This is the article that I will be focusing on for my thesis this semester.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is a clear and concise sentence that describes the articles topic, but doesn't give a description of the articles major sections. I believe that the lead section can be expanded upon a bit, going into what the Adoption of Safe Families Act is about. The article has a very neutral tone, and doesn't try to persuade the reader to agree/disagree with the bill. I feel there may be better references that could be used to expand on the provisions of the bill and the impacts that the bill had up to today. The article is broken down into sections, and well-written. It is also well organized, maybe the provisions section can be expanded upon more. There isn't really much going on in the talk section, but there was another student editor from the Winter 2020 semester.