User:Deb316/Gibson's donuts/Ainsleymacdougal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Deb316


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Deb316/Gibson's donuts - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Doesn't exist

Evaluate the drafted changes
I found this article very informative. The introduction gives just enough basic information where readers can choose if they want to continue to learn more detail or not. The history section is interesting and I like that there are many citations. I would consider removing the quote in the history paragraph since it's best to leave quotes off of Wikipedia- maybe you could reword it and cite it. Under the menu section I'd say "features a multitude of different menu items" or "many different items" instead of "a few" since you go on to list a pretty good amount. I think the whole menu paragraph had valuable information. You might not need a whole header for the location, maybe you could put the address in the introduction. I wouldn't change anything in the reception paragraph besides the "it has paid off" part which could be considered an opinion. The rest of it is notable and relevant to the shop. Overall, I think the wiki has a great amount of material especially since it's an original article. I love Gibson's so it's fun to read this. You have a good amount of references and they all seem reliable to me.