User:Deborahspearman4/Brennan Center for Justice/Jdoebler Peer Review

General info
Deborahspearman4
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Deborahspearman4/Brennan Center for Justice
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brennan Center for Justice

Evaluate the drafted changes
While the information is valuable, I think it may come across as biased to include a whole section on how to support the organization, and pushes the line of NOTPROMO, and may not be considered notable information about the organization for a wikipedia page, as the only place covering that information is the centers own website, rather than independent sources. You may want to consider instead condensing it into a smaller section about member activity within the organization. I do agree that the page could benefit from some visuals as well. Jdoebler (talk) 03:06, 26 September 2023 (UTC)