User:Deborahspearman4/Pay-to-play/Bibliography

You will be compiling your bibliography and creating an outline of the changes you will make in this sandbox.

Outline of proposed changes
The proposed changes for the given paragraph are aimed at improving its structure and readability while adding more context and depth to the discussion of "pay-to-play" in politics:

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 * 1) Revised Introduction:
 * 2) * The introductory paragraph can be condensed for clarity and flow, combining key points about what "pay-to-play" means and its relevance in politics.
 * 3) Incorporation of Historical Context:
 * 4) * Expand on the historical context of "pay-to-play" by mentioning specific events or legislation that contributed to its prominence in the 20th century.
 * 5) Clarity on Origins:
 * 6) * Mention that while the term "pay-to-play" doesn't have a single creator, it has organically evolved within political and media discussions.
 * 7) Prominence and Usage:
 * 8) * Provide a more detailed explanation of why "pay-to-play" gained prominence in the late 20th and early 21st centuries, such as specific political scandals or reforms that drew attention to this issue.
 * 9) Effects on People:
 * 10) * Elaborate on each effect of "pay-to-play" on the political system and individuals, offering examples or real-world scenarios to illustrate these effects.
 * 11) Incorporate Source Citations:
 * 12) * Integrate the source citations seamlessly within the text where specific information or data is mentioned.