User:Debungalo/Open prison/Oikogeniakes15 Peer Review

General info
Debungalo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Debungalo/Open prison
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Open prison

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Debungalo,

good job on the Humanistic values that you explained in the first paragraph. It explains briefly the meaning of the open prisons effects. I am not sure if this is necessary but the citation is not added on the paragraph to see where you got the information. The article that you used for the draft "Inmates’ perceptions and experiences of how they were prepared for release from a Norwegian open prison"  talks mostly about Norwegian open prisons and I think that  says nothing about Indonesia's open prisons. If you could add the article that you used to add info for Indonesia open prisons would be great. . Also, on the "Indonesia" paragraph I see that is a copy of the main article(Open Prisons). I am not sure if you added it there before the peer review. If you did add it, then I believe that is concise and clear the way you provide information to explain the benefits on humanistic values ("humane environment for immigrants") in open prisons in Indonesia. Overall, the information provided is clear, easy to read, and it is related to the main article. The only think that I am confused is if the first paragraph of the Indonesia paragraph is added by you or copied by you. Finally, I believe that citations are needed to be included to the information added in the text and specifically the citation that you got the information about Indonesia's open prisons.

Thank you.