User:Decampr/Clitoris/TanishaT Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Becca
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Decampr/sandbox

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Content added effectively fills information gaps present in the original article
 * Information is up-to-date with current research and accepted findings
 * Under the "other mammals section", it would benefit the reader to paraphrase the quote in the first paragraph in a simpler terms, especially for someone unfamiliar with the biological concepts.

Tone and Balance

 * Content presented in a neutral and unbiased
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * More than sufficient references used from reputable and accessible resources

Organization

 * Effective categorization of exemplary species, especially renaming Spider monkeys and bonobos subheading to Non-human primates, which is a more general and encompassing name for the information provided
 * All information organized in easy to navigate subheadings that lead reader directly to desired section

Overall impressions

 * Additions to article highly relevant and necessary for a comprehensive understanding of the topic
 * The moles subheading could be expanded on as it does not provide any direct information to the clitoris in this taxa