User:Declancohan/Jamie Siminoff/Kpere039 Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Make sure to include subtitles to help the viewer/reader identify the section they are reading so they don't get confused and misdirected between paragraphs. Furthermore, there are a few grammar mistakes that can be fixed, and the citing of the articles must be properly organized according to how the trainings were instructing the editors to organize their pages.