User:Declancohan/Jamie Siminoff/Macieyale Peer Review

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Jaime
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This group needs to add headings and subtitles to make it easier for reader as well as more organized set up, their information looks blobby and you can't really tell which goes with what. They should also make the timeline in better order and line them up better. Organizing the links would be productive and make more sense.