User:Deebdina/Qutbuddin Mosque/N hatem2001 Peer Review

General info
Dina Deeb
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Editing User:Deebdina/Qutbuddin Mosque - Wikipedia
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The introduction is well-presented, providing an overview of the mosque, but I believe stating that confusing this mosque  with another should be further elaborated on. I like a lot stating the uncertain historical facts in the first sentence under the section of patronage, which show that you researched the buildings history well, and affirms the notability of the provided information.

Content

The content is very nice. I see detailed sections such as the exterior section, while others need some further development and illustrations such as the interior part. I also suggest talking about the plans of the mosque.

Tone and balance

Overall I don’t see a problem with tone and balance other than stating that mosque does not represent any architectural development in the section of architecture and design, and then mentioning that it has a similar plan of Ahmad Shah mosque but with different decorations. I suggest always providing detailed illustrations when mentioning a critical information.

Sources and References

There are two references, one of which is a 1-2 page article. I know it might be hard to find references, but in this case. I suggest expanding the article by trying to review the buildings established in this area during the same period and making a comparison and elaborating on the connection between the two.

Organization

The article is broken down into sections which allow the reader to find what he needed quickly. I suggest using Grammarly for spelling check and for grammar.

Images and media

One of the images is irrelevant as it provides a map of India in 1525, while the article states that the building was built during the reign of Ahmad Shah between 1451 and 1458. I suggest adding more images of the building or a relevant map.

Overall impression

Overall the article is so many strength points, but just needs some editing. Well done, Dina.