User:Deedeeedits/Theater (structure)/Dancermia11 Peer Review

Peer review by Mia

Lead:

create a lead with an introductory sentence that describes your articles topic along with its changes.

Content:

I think the content you want to add is very relevant to the article and will be very beneficial. Be sure that your ideas such as the theater design etc. is all up to date and accurate.

Tone and balance:

the content added is neutral

Sources:

All sources have been checked and are current and relevant to the topic.

Organization:

Although I can't fully see the structure of your overall article, the way it is set up now could be more well structured to fit within the subtopics of the article. Play around with this.

Media:

I would definitely suggest adding cited images of significant parts of the stage that you highlight in your draft such as "altar" etc. make sure these images are non-copyright and up to date.

Overall, with a little more work and added information /media I think this article will benefit greatly from your edits for a more comprehensible read.

General info
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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