User:Deep sea coral/Melanie Smith (equestrian)/Emmalauren19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Deep sea Coral


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very good start. I would give a little bit more info in the lead section. Not much there.

The content is up to date and detailed but I think you could possibly add more about things such as her early life and childhood. The info you have provided is good!

Tone is good! Not unbiased

Sources are also good and links worked for me

No pictures

I would add a few more sources if possible and like I said more information if possible but it is a really great start.