User:Deezytings/Psychological resistance/CDLR50 Peer Review

General info
Deezytings
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Deezytings/Psychological_resistance?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychological resistance:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

I appreciate your additions to the Lead as I feel that it could be better explained. The two sentences you have added appear to be moving in that direction; however, it would be helpful to have further explanation of what is meant with is says, "understanding its roots." If this is what is affecting whether someone is resistant or passive aggressive, then what is the root cause of either?

I also think this sentence could be further explored or explained:

"It impedes the development of authentic, reciprocally nurturing experiences in a clinical setting. It is established that the common source of resistances and defenses is shame. This and similar negative attitudes may be the result of social stigmatization of a particular condition, such as psychological resistance towards insulin treatment of diabetes."

It touches on the cause, but doesn't fully examine it.

Content

Perhaps the Lead could mention some of the other types of resistance in summary.

The Lead seems to indicate that Resistance is wrong or an incorrect reaction based on shame; however, some of the content explains otherwise as it's much more complex and may even have some validity to it. Perhaps this would be better examined and explained.

Sources and References

I do not see a source for the sentences you have added.

Overall

It appears you're on the right track; however, at this point, I am limited in what I can comment on as far as your edits. Good luck! This is an interesting topic which I was not previously aware of.