User:Deezytings/Psychological resistance/Skycbradford Peer Review

General info
Deezytings
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Deezytings/Psychological_resistance?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Psychological resistance

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see that you added information to the lead. I think it is a great addition and I would love to see what you add to it! Maybe by explaining its roots a little further and then tie it into the origins section it can flow and seem less like a personal essay paper (I read where it says that on the original article and I am trying to figure out what parts it is referencing to).

I have a few ideas that may help you further your article. The realistic resistance and interpersonal resistance sections are lacking depth. Not to mention, lacking citations (maybe this is what it means by it sounding like a personal essay). In the interpersonal resistance section, I think adding how this affects individuals would be a great addition. I think the realistic resistance section needs to be rewritten entirely, as it was difficult to understand and does not seem to be written in a neutral tone. I also noticed the Handling resistance in psychotherapy section is lacking citations as well.

I recommend keeping you list of references in your article under the 'References' section. It makes it easy to access them when you need them and it is useful if you plan on reusing sources.

I hope this helps and gives you a few ideas to add to the article! I can't wait to see the final product!