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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Effects of domestic violence on children
 * Article Evaluation: The introductory sentence mentions how domestic violence is between partners but in reality it can also be among family members, ex-spouses and former or current intimate cohabitants. The Philippines fact mentioned in the introduction seems irrelevant to the introduction so I believe it needs to be removed. Also, there are two physical symptoms sections. One needs to be deleted and just combine the information in one section.Article should include short and long term effects on children who are exposed to domestic violence. The article is missing a lot of symptoms that belong in certain categories such as suicidal ideations, school issues, eating and sleeping disorders, emotional neediness, etc. Could possibly include effects of domestic violence on children from different countries. More information is needed for the subsection: Assessment. More visual content needs to be added such as graphs that demonstrate statistics and images that depict the emotional state of children asa result of domestic violence (can be other symptoms).
 * Sources
 * https://www.acesdv.org/domestic-violence-graphics/types-of-abuse/
 * https://psycnet.apa.org/record/2001-01076-003
 * https://dvcc.delaware.gov/background-purpose/dynamics-domestic-abuse/
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0190740910001337
 * https://link.springer.com/article/10.1023/A:1024910416164
 * https://psycnet.apa.org/doiLanding?doi=10.1037/0012-1649.29.1.44
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.3109/01460869509087269?casa_token=7o9M0ywAZqwAAAAA:MSLQtghpbjlhJPHs_rKcJa_P7IU75Mikts7pIM1wOxp6E4kDPriAUaod15frO1jqHZlMkIACjo2TFA
 * https://link.springer.com/article/10.1023/A:1011138332712
 * https://www.aafp.org/afp/2002/1201/p2052.html
 * https://link.springer.com/article/10.1023/A:1011138332712
 * https://www.aafp.org/afp/2002/1201/p2052.html

Option 2

 * Article title: Child abuse
 * Article Evaluation: The article could include a section about gender based violence against boys considering there is already a section for girls. For the legislation section, more countries can be included. For the effects section, a behavioral, societal, and economic sub section can be included. For the worldwide subsection, more information on other countries should be included. The assessment section lacks information, this section is quite important which is why more information needs to be included. More assessment methods should be listed and explained concisely. The article throughout has information that needs citations and grammatical errors to be fixed.
 * Sources
 * https://aifs.gov.au/cfca/publications/effects-child-abuse-and-neglect-children-and-adolescents
 * https://psycnet.apa.org/record/1992-98652-000
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1207/S15374424jccp2902_11?casa_token=Nm9F2nG4HxoAAAAA:NMUfWMUQ6WnQIPCyXj5n5SdwOQsXvj-9RtH--wpQWO3WSB0K0PHkkCtrJMTf8jMBkdt-E0p4PYFKmg
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0145213400001794
 * https://psycnet.apa.org/record/1988-98633-000
 * https://psycnet.apa.org/buy/2000-15399-012
 * http://search.proquest.com/openview/f6e5cc2d65ca7f4c517a303eb474c5c8/1?pq-origsite=gscholar&cbl=40853&casa_token=qozeKnyEQ4AAAAAA:mH9QzTiTWQWghlrU3SNRIdYuAM8FSDB6iCkcZtqUP56YxgopekLlBZ2MHHhARi-r9mKH0ocMSkc
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=yRLYAQAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PP1&dq=child+abuse+assessment&ots=UF4yEXldWV&sig=Czbnwp16302JyB_DAkOlkcpr3Yw#v=onepage&q=child%20abuse%20assessment&f=false
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=BlJHAAAAMAAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PP8&dq=child+abuse+assessment&ots=QAi5L007JW&sig=GuZmomCUhWLBEDZfWKjQtx6mK0E#v=onepage&q=child%20abuse%20assessment&f=false
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=yRLYAQAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PP1&dq=child+abuse+assessment&ots=UF4yEXldWV&sig=Czbnwp16302JyB_DAkOlkcpr3Yw#v=onepage&q=child%20abuse%20assessment&f=false
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=BlJHAAAAMAAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PP8&dq=child+abuse+assessment&ots=QAi5L007JW&sig=GuZmomCUhWLBEDZfWKjQtx6mK0E#v=onepage&q=child%20abuse%20assessment&f=false

Option 3

 * Article title: Child development
 * Article Evaluation: Erik Erikson's eight stages can be separated into sub sections just how Piaget's stages were listed and explained in greater detail. Throughout the article there were missing citations. Images can be included for each theory mentioned to help the reader visualize the stages. Could include a section on parental roles in child development. More information can be added to the research issues and methods section considering there is very little information presented. Aspects section lacks facts and information, only one sentence can be found and there is no citation for it. Maybe expanding on the introduction for this section might help. Perhaps, an effects on child development section can be added.
 * Sources
 * https://psycnet.apa.org/record/2001-06979-000
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=iwdjF4r_OF0C&oi=fnd&pg=PR7&dq=child+development&ots=hSM53NBt4m&sig=iSdWZMmjklmpoQHzhSQrqH0cfmU#v=onepage&q=child%20development&f=false
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4800975/
 * https://psycnet.apa.org/getdoi.cfm?doi=10.1037/0003-066X.53.2.185
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0140673607600762
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1111/j.1469-7610.1994.tb01133.x?casa_token=1qJsVcvCOAsAAAAA:nsthBeMqC-qnecJRFI4e9VqK5oVb5ILyaSJ3pWsuSYbZQ9oJ21iytm--fC4LhECm5tqsfDdkh67VBX-c
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=-3O33NfSzrsC&oi=fnd&pg=PA1&dq=child+development+theories&ots=A5kH_JQJgL&sig=I9dh5ZtBizWqCLlxqPvEX3Vr9Uk#v=onepage&q=child%20development%20theories&f=false
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/j.1651-2227.2006.tb02379.x?casa_token=huejSY-U1zAAAAAA%3AJLuudfBHxOBj2zsqj4DEyMzgsOlkYAXZ_9MK2XKlcQbfMeUISWRb-0ElE0PcOJvsZ3mxcVVdnqVx0LdW
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=-3O33NfSzrsC&oi=fnd&pg=PA1&dq=child+development+theories&ots=A5kH_JQJgL&sig=I9dh5ZtBizWqCLlxqPvEX3Vr9Uk#v=onepage&q=child%20development%20theories&f=false
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/j.1651-2227.2006.tb02379.x?casa_token=huejSY-U1zAAAAAA%3AJLuudfBHxOBj2zsqj4DEyMzgsOlkYAXZ_9MK2XKlcQbfMeUISWRb-0ElE0PcOJvsZ3mxcVVdnqVx0LdW

Option 4

 * Article title: Mental disorders diagnosed in childhood
 * Article Evaluation: There are diagnoses missing, only a couple are mentioned. The article doesn't have any visual content which makes it hard for the reader to remain engaged when just looking at blocks of text. Cause, Symptoms, and Treatment sub sections need a lot of work done for some diagnoses. Perhaps, the article should just focus on the DSM 5 instead of focusing on both DSM 5 and ICD 10 since that would be too much information to be listed on one article. The mental disorders found in the DSM should be updated with the most recent manual. Minor issues with information missing citations.
 * Sources
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2807642/
 * https://link.springer.com/article/10.1023/A:1021826216025
 * https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/BF03403706
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/jcpp.12381
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/j.1751-7893.2012.00376.x?casa_token=2vpSpg-pNZQAAAAA%3As4xcDyBEFGMVYt0Il04GytMMNML4LAERWTFDWYGNRDfL5vhfAgjEphqb0DKIt5mWgCKoz77VEt3ArP-l
 * https://s3.amazonaws.com/academia.edu.documents/38718268/CSL6820_21.pdf?response-content-disposition=inline%3B%20filename%3DAMBERTON_UNIVERSITY_SYLLABUS_FOR_LECTURE.pdf&X-Amz-Algorithm=AWS4-HMAC-SHA256&X-Amz-Credential=ASIATUSBJ6BAJZ2AFS37%2F20200426%2Fus-east-1%2Fs3%2Faws4_request&X-Amz-Date=20200426T063423Z&X-Amz-Expires=3600&X-Amz-Security-Token=IQoJb3JpZ2luX2VjEHIaCXVzLWVhc3QtMSJHMEUCIQCC9AnR5jRSMrIfeyUTJ1zrG9cEKOySsOdAtmVv%2BsZBswIgGY6KVQGud4TKVh5w5F1aDIJtMUPRDf1lmyAjUUQ8Jg0qvQMIm%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2FARAAGgwyNTAzMTg4MTEyMDAiDGIXyMutvq8KQe9dCCqRAy0Dw1J8m2qmsI5xt7TipPo3Tt2byANV3Krntj%2Fs%2BDPcq9yt5S%2Bx33Ikh7lfPJasDJNLfhwhKYcduw3sHnYz8mKRYtzArnS1%2BWmbuXI%2F%2BSHD%2BbHiflORaQoimMR4BC1ah2g8crE4k8f49h8HUM9uJhkl6Tdk5u8CBmHcs0DnP5hTChlfnJmGSD%2FbicbTyfp6HCfw%2BQIftzOXwYKH67cWHyfBkXPvMFNAf5m%2FfNwvt1jyjYGsSBvVQrECXGoJxPr9fQmaL8798At11tcqlZvtmbi%2FPs75zJmzkCSYfx3ANfbGVdO2weS7w4l8RQ4cSqt9sR0lw3lct5p63Sq%2BFkPJ0BYo7jnWOXWs4efQ2rGlNo%2FCuoGbQPN2SljpFIUC4qBzTlDlsQ3UYMEhso%2B0Hk6NC3JbHogiCrBne4PZkRv2Q4Yma1kr3J3QIioUzPx2FPID02DXjT60DFynbfM2w3lsCdRsnI0vZrLWo%2FHuOjCSCLtACKyH4dcnbWUpeQ1SABxObds%2Flc7QG2DAl7H1xeMkp7vYMIfKk%2FUFOusBOFPzrrWTfL7WqPO4hQTD7QwjsXF827llBgNDPF9LMU8%2FYU8dyNnDK%2FOfpooCLEieG%2BNlEt5U%2FyywOOmssyrkOeFbiw0j25II%2BKPGSa8DUKx830gJ%2Fm%2BljAgedndNDb5tzfjuR1AUqHVSiBSxwwXdmwGTxP2wDu5AkrdAYmcKiTZNH1XIDiBLaJCsn4%2FzDzuKKG9wBL5Zx5EZzXlo7Ycg9%2BqaCiQ%2FQPKiUNTnniExNshD5rm2tdJattxcpAzovarMeC5PtArV0dzDcj1OHF2kiqoSO2sY%2BXofwLRsgrbxNKS5EGBIOcAm1H1eSg%3D%3D&X-Amz-SignedHeaders=host&X-Amz-Signature=1734d017ace507ffbb03586b9c99413cdb8d2218d1d8e3f9ca2f9482a1cbc872
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=-JivBAAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PT18&dq=manual+of+mental+disorders&ots=ceVR75QGxf&sig=YIhobrESVEbbkDbIFv1x80w_yZo#v=onepage&q=manual%20of%20mental%20disorders&f=false
 * https://s3.amazonaws.com/academia.edu.documents/38718268/CSL6820_21.pdf?response-content-disposition=inline%3B%20filename%3DAMBERTON_UNIVERSITY_SYLLABUS_FOR_LECTURE.pdf&X-Amz-Algorithm=AWS4-HMAC-SHA256&X-Amz-Credential=ASIATUSBJ6BAJZ2AFS37%2F20200426%2Fus-east-1%2Fs3%2Faws4_request&X-Amz-Date=20200426T063423Z&X-Amz-Expires=3600&X-Amz-Security-Token=IQoJb3JpZ2luX2VjEHIaCXVzLWVhc3QtMSJHMEUCIQCC9AnR5jRSMrIfeyUTJ1zrG9cEKOySsOdAtmVv%2BsZBswIgGY6KVQGud4TKVh5w5F1aDIJtMUPRDf1lmyAjUUQ8Jg0qvQMIm%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2F%2FARAAGgwyNTAzMTg4MTEyMDAiDGIXyMutvq8KQe9dCCqRAy0Dw1J8m2qmsI5xt7TipPo3Tt2byANV3Krntj%2Fs%2BDPcq9yt5S%2Bx33Ikh7lfPJasDJNLfhwhKYcduw3sHnYz8mKRYtzArnS1%2BWmbuXI%2F%2BSHD%2BbHiflORaQoimMR4BC1ah2g8crE4k8f49h8HUM9uJhkl6Tdk5u8CBmHcs0DnP5hTChlfnJmGSD%2FbicbTyfp6HCfw%2BQIftzOXwYKH67cWHyfBkXPvMFNAf5m%2FfNwvt1jyjYGsSBvVQrECXGoJxPr9fQmaL8798At11tcqlZvtmbi%2FPs75zJmzkCSYfx3ANfbGVdO2weS7w4l8RQ4cSqt9sR0lw3lct5p63Sq%2BFkPJ0BYo7jnWOXWs4efQ2rGlNo%2FCuoGbQPN2SljpFIUC4qBzTlDlsQ3UYMEhso%2B0Hk6NC3JbHogiCrBne4PZkRv2Q4Yma1kr3J3QIioUzPx2FPID02DXjT60DFynbfM2w3lsCdRsnI0vZrLWo%2FHuOjCSCLtACKyH4dcnbWUpeQ1SABxObds%2Flc7QG2DAl7H1xeMkp7vYMIfKk%2FUFOusBOFPzrrWTfL7WqPO4hQTD7QwjsXF827llBgNDPF9LMU8%2FYU8dyNnDK%2FOfpooCLEieG%2BNlEt5U%2FyywOOmssyrkOeFbiw0j25II%2BKPGSa8DUKx830gJ%2Fm%2BljAgedndNDb5tzfjuR1AUqHVSiBSxwwXdmwGTxP2wDu5AkrdAYmcKiTZNH1XIDiBLaJCsn4%2FzDzuKKG9wBL5Zx5EZzXlo7Ycg9%2BqaCiQ%2FQPKiUNTnniExNshD5rm2tdJattxcpAzovarMeC5PtArV0dzDcj1OHF2kiqoSO2sY%2BXofwLRsgrbxNKS5EGBIOcAm1H1eSg%3D%3D&X-Amz-SignedHeaders=host&X-Amz-Signature=1734d017ace507ffbb03586b9c99413cdb8d2218d1d8e3f9ca2f9482a1cbc872
 * https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=-JivBAAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PT18&dq=manual+of+mental+disorders&ots=ceVR75QGxf&sig=YIhobrESVEbbkDbIFv1x80w_yZo#v=onepage&q=manual%20of%20mental%20disorders&f=false

Option 5

 * Article title: N/A
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