User:Delaney555/Asperger syndrome/Sydanne7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Delaney555


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Delaney555/Asperger_syndrome?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Asperger syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good edits thus far!

When you say, "Because of their lack of social cues and social disadvantages it can make a person (individuals) with Aspergers come off as rude", maybe say "Due to social disadvantages and their lack of social cues, individuals with Aspergers syndrome may present as impolite" instead.

When you say, "More likely than not ' someone (individuals) with Aspergers desires (desire relationships) a relationship and tend to be more satisfied in their romantic relationship when their partner also is on the Autism spectrum",''' maybe say "Many individuals with Aspergers Syndrome desire romantic relationships and tend to be more satisfied in them when their partner is also on the Autism spectrum."

When you say, "Learning how to communicate and help set a routine for their family member with Aspergers can as be very beneficial. Patience is also key because of the social and emotional difficulties someone with Aspergers may deal with", maybe say "Communication, consistency, and patience is key when caring for an individual with Aspergers Syndrome due to their social and emotional difficulties".

Very minor changes above. I think your edits have been great so far! Good luck on the rest of your editing :)