User:Delaney barghols/Jane Eleanor Datcher/Queenb8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Delaney barghols


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Delaney barghols/Jane Eleanor Datcher


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jane Eleanor Datcher

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Article was well drafted and thought out. I thought it was a great addition to include a section about her legacy. If there was anything to add, I would see if you could find more information for what she did as a botanist, maybe more details about her works. I know that since there are content gaps online this may be difficult to find, but I think it would make the article even stronger in terms of really bringing recognition to her. Overall, I thought the article was great. It was nice grammatically and provided thorough information about Jane's family and her contributions to science.