User:Delbel4567/Caffeine use for sport/Jawabii01 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Delbel4567


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Delbel4567/Caffeine_use_for_sport?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Caffeine use for sport

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Great addition of content and sentence structure. Make sure you keep the article neutral when writing out the "Endurance athletes" sentence you didn't agree with. You could add more information on the studies about low dosage caffeine compared to high dosage caffeine as I don't see it mentioned much in the article. That's very interesting about the NCAA's caffeine limit, that's a very good attention grabber in my opinion. For what reason would they consider caffeine as a stimulant drug as I believe it doesn't have the same effects something like steroids may have? Matthew Mayer had a caffeine induced insomnia after drinking 6 monsters, perhaps that story could give you some additional inspiration for your article. Overall spelling looks good. Can't identify any major punctuation mistakes, but I believe the semicolon in the second sentence of the second paragraph could be a period (I'd make sure with Dr. Rock to be sure).