User:Delcarl11/Channel Islands National Marine Sanctuary/Isaiisas Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Isai Isas (~.)(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Channel Islands National Marine Sanctuary


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This article contains information that is irrelevant to the subject matter. It introduces “Recreational Activities” rather than focusing on the marine sanctuary itself. Maybe, by eliminating a few topics to make it seen less like an advertisement would make this article better.