User:Demi12005/Evaluate an Article

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Lead Section:

Yes, the lead section does have an introduction sentence. Yes, it includes where the place is located and also says who owns the company. No, this article is up to date and has all information that is still true to this day! I think that is is not overly detailed and has just the right amount of information about Kings Island.

Content:

Yes, the article is relevant to the topic. Yes, the content is up to date. As of right now, I am not seeing anything that is missing or does not belong. this article does not talk about why they had to close down son of beast. Which I would find very interesting.

Tone and Balance

I think this article is very neutral and I have not found anything that seems biased toward any position. I think that they could talk more about what rides have closed down and why that had to happen. also they could talk more about the new rides. Yes, I think that the viewpoint in the article are accurate. From what I have read I do not think that this article is trying to persuade anyone to favor one thing over another.

Sources and References

Yes, all facts from this essay are backed up with reliable sources and information. Yes, the sources are thorough and they reflect the available literature on the topic. From my understanding yes the sources are current and correct. Yes this is written by a diverse spectrum of people. They do include some people in this but there isn't many historical people to talk about when talking about Kings Island. Yes, some of the sources are from a long time ago. So, I would think there would be better sources out there now. Yes, the links work!

Organization and Writing Quality

Yes, I find that my article is very easy to read and that it is as short as they could have made it. I think that is it well organized and clear. From what I can see this article doesn't have any grammatical or spelling errors. Yes, the article is well written and organized.

Images and Media

Yes, the article does include some pictures and they do help understanding of the topic. Yes, the images state what the picture is. Yes, they all are cited correctly. Yes, they are placed after they would talk about the ride.

Talk Page Discussion

The conversations on the talk page was talking about how someone from the walking dead visited Kings Islands. They said that it was nothing too major and that it was still an event that happened. It is rated in the b class and it is in WikiProjects. This article talks more about in depth of my topic.

Overall Impressions

I feel like there is still room for improvement but overall is not too bad. I think the strengths are including every ride and what year it was build and what the name of it is. I think there can be more details about the camp that kings island had. I think that the article is well developed and is very clear and organized.