User:Demilynnn/Boscotrecase/Ysbin0121 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Demilynnn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Demilynnn/Boscotrecase
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I would say sources are reliable and have a neutral tone, but the use of words such as ‘possibly,’ ‘most likely,’ and ‘may’ would imply a lack of credibility. So try to paraphrase those terms or research more reliable resources for reliability. Paragraphs are easy to follow, but using imagery such as floor plans or pictures of frescoes would help readers understand and follow along with the content.