User:Demynesmith/Benthiocarb/Candencemcneil Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The article that I am reviewing is Demynesmith Benthiocarb article.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Demynesmith/Benthiocarb?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Benthiocarb

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

The lead of the article have not been updated or had any new content added by the author. There is a small bibliography included in the current version of the article but not the draft. However, the introduction does not include separate parts of the article and what would be discussed. In conclusion the lead is very concise but gives no further information on what will be discussed throughout the article.

Content

There is no added content for the article as a whole. Some information that could be included is what happens when in contact with things it should not be.

Tone and Balance

Because there was no content added I was not able to gauge the tone and balance of the article.

Sources and References

Only one sources included in the article backs up the information included in the introduction. Also, the one source that is used in the introduction is the only source that works. All sources used are between the years 1987-1997 which is relevant.

Organization

Because there was no new information added, I can not see any organization.

Images and Media

The article does include a image of the molecule Benthiocarb which can help the reader visualize what the chemical make up may be.

Overall

The content has not improved as there was not much added to the article as a whole. The contents can be improved by discussing more about Bethiocarb, such as how were they produced, are they harmful, where specifically are they used, etc.