User:Dengtianhei/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Suzhou Lida Middle School


 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * -The lead section has missing parts. It includes a short overview, however, it doesn't navigate the article for readers. The lead section also miss details.
 * Content
 * -The content is missing many important information, for example, detailed geographic location, school motto, precise date of foundation.
 * Tone and Balance
 * -The tone is neutral.
 * Sources and References
 * -There's no sources cited for this article. Its claims like being affiliated with Suzhou High School can't be verified and supported. There are reliable sources related to this topic but weren't included in this article.
 * Organization and Writing Quality
 * -Clearly written and easy to read.
 * -No spelling or grammar error.
 * Images and Media
 * -The article doesn't include images or media to enhance reading for this topic.
 * Talk Page Discussion
 * -No conversation was found.
 * -The article is rated as stub-level and low-importance.
 * -The article is in the WikiProject China and WikiProject Education.
 * Overall Impressions
 * -The article is incompleted with only an introduction paragraph. It is missing most of the information related to this topic.


 * Sources

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Li Zhi (singer)


 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * -There's a lead section, introduction is clear.
 * Content
 * -The content is lacking of details.
 * -The content focuses too much on one aspect.
 * Tone and Balance
 * -The tone is neutral.
 * Sources and References
 * -Lack of sources for claims. For example, Plan 334 doesn't have a source and can't be backed up in the article.
 * Organization and Writing Quality
 * -Clearly written and easy to read, no spelling or grammar error.
 * Images and Media
 * -The article doesn't include images or media.
 * Talk Page Discussion
 * -Conversations were about adding images, and creating a section for this topic, however, they are not yet to be finished.
 * -The article is rated as start-level.
 * -The article is in the WikiProject Articles for creation, WikiProject Biography / Musicians and WikiProject China / Entertainment.
 * Overall Impressions
 * -The article has more details needed to be added. It is incomplete but has a basic structure that can be worked on.


 * Sources

Option 3

 * Article title
 * CaptainMo


 * Article Evaluation
 * Sources
 * Sources

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Dulwich International High School Suzhou


 * Article Evaluation
 * Sources
 * Sources

Option 5 (Preferred Option)

 * Article title
 * Triple Door (novel)


 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * -The lead section clearly introduce the topic related to the article, however, more details needed to be added, and tables of content or navigation sentences are missing.
 * Content
 * -The content is relevant to the topic, but is very limited in aspects of the topic.
 * -The content only includes the overview of the novel.
 * Tone and Balance
 * -The tone is neutral.
 * Sources and References
 * -Only some facts are backed up.
 * -Limited reliable sources.
 * -One source is not acceptable and out-of-date.
 * Organization and Writing Quality
 * -The article is poorly organized, writing quality is acceptable.
 * Images and Media
 * -Missing images and media related to the topic.
 * Talk Page Discussion
 * -No conversation was found.
 * -The article is rated as stub-level and low-importance.
 * -The article is within the field of WikiProject Novels.
 * Overall Impressions
 * -The article is incompleted.
 * -The article focus on summarizing the novel, but failing to provide other important information related to the topic.
 * -Adding awards, controversial opinions among the society regarding to this novel and other related information.


 * Sources