User:Denisej 2/Dopaminergic pathways/Eresha8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Denisej 2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Denisej%202/Dopaminergic_pathways?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dopaminergic pathways

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes made to the lead section improve the clarity of the article. Narrowing down the information the article addresses helps to keep the focus on exactly what the article is about. The changes made in this regard are beneficial, but be careful to make sure you don't cut out too much information moving forward. The citations added are recent and relevant. I think it would improve the article if you implemented sources that are meta-analyses, as the are very reliable sources. The information added maintains a neutral tone and is well organized. Overall I think you are doing a great job improving and refining this article and keeping it on topic, but do look into providing sources that are meta-analyses.