User:Denisej 2/Dopaminergic pathways/Hkhan11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Denisej2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Denisej%202/Dopaminergic_pathways?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dopaminergic pathways

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Good start. With regards to the lead, it does go into brief detail of what the article is about. Within the body, my suggestion, as more than preference, would to be to take out the table and just write it in a paragraph. You could incorporate graphics of all the pathways, and also have one that summarizes all of the pathways. You could also talk about how each pathway has to do with certain brain function, which I think is your section below the table. You could also go into detail with the role that these pathways have to do with regards to any disorders and such. All in all, it is a good edit and sources are up to date as well.