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OLES2129 - Writing For The Digital World

Tutorial 1 - Week 3: Activity 1 - 'From Scratch'

Article: 'The Tempest'

If you had created this article first - what would you have done differently?

- If I had created this article, my first priority would have been to develop a brief synopsis of the play's plot. I would also have inserted some background and contextual information surrounding the creation of the play, such as Shakespeare's own personal background. Furthermore, I also would have gathered and inserted some preliminary sources surrounding the contextual information of the play, as well potential interpretations.

If you were the second reader, how would you have edited the article?

- As the second reader of the page, I would have edited it by elaborating upon the plot more, such as highlighting specific events and the consequences of certain actions on the greater plot. I would also have created a character list, highlighting the role and position of the characters in the world of the play, as well as their relationship to other characters. Another aspect I would have edited would be to create a section on the major themes and ideas presented throughout the play.