User:Depo808knee/Steve Ramirez/Gregorymess Peer Review

General info
Depo808knee
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Depo808knee/Steve_Ramirez?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Depo808knee/Steve_Ramirez?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first thing I noticed was the career section, which most would assume is the main part, is one sentence. Some of the introduction definitely could have been added to the career section. While lengthy, the introduction provides great insight into who Steve Ramirez is.