User:Depo808knee/Steve Ramirez/Scoobyysnacks Peer Review

General info
Depo808knee
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Depo808knee/Steve_Ramirez?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that it is a well-written article that doesn't contain any biased elements. I do think it would be wise to try to rid of a few phrases or words. Also, don't forget to add the year he was born and if he had passed away, the year he died in the introduction section. There are no grammer or spelling errors either, good job!