User:Depo808knee/Steve Ramirez/Thenextbrk Peer Review

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EBGood, Sdang05, Depo808knee
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Depo808knee/Steve_Ramirez?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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This is a good start to your page on Steve Ramirez. The lead is very good and gives a brief introduction to who Steve Ramirez is. It properly reflects the content on the rest of the page. The research contributions section could use more work. From what I've heard, Steve Ramirez has a lot of contributions in his field that could be added to this section. It could expanded upon and go more into depth on the mice experiment. The awards section is very good, I would recommend just splitting each of the awards into bullet points if you can. Besides that, excellent job on staying neutral while writing informatively.