User:DerekE9831/Trevor David Rhone/Devin Stangle Peer Review

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DerekE9831, Dreamdar94488, MrDoritos322, VicVal2315, CuriousKurti
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:DerekE9831/Trevor David Rhone
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Evaluate the drafted changes
They have a good use of wiki links throughout their entire article. The longest section was about their person's career I would like to see more sections added and would like if possible is the awards section was longer. The make good use of their links including bringing in their own that they found. I think if they reuse their 7th link they maybe able to create a new smaller section on the research with a focus on how Trevor Rhone contributed towards it. The formatting is done really well and it is easy to follow along.