User:DerekE9831/Trevor David Rhone/JenniGump Peer Review

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Remove "This is the sandbox page" grey box.

Article draft
remove article draft heading

remove capitalization on "Assistant Professor of Physics, Applied Physics, and Astronomy"

after the first mention of his name, after only refer to him by his last name.

Early life and education- only capitalization in the beginning
another way to write "assistant professor of physics" is "educators assistant in physics"

citation needed for PH.D

Career
more citations are needed