User:Destiny Hartanto/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
2021 in Indonesia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because the topic of this article is personal to me. My background comes from Indonesia and I wanted to know more about my country while adding contributions to this article for other people to know about.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section

This article does not have a brief overview of the whole article in the first paragraph, the first sentence only introduces the table of contents. There are no clear sentences that describes the articles' topic nor does it summarizes the sections. The absence of content in the lead section might be due to the topic being something that has not happened yet and becomes an empty article.

Content

The content seems to have only three important aspects of a country, their presidents, events and deaths. However, there should be more aspects to the country's happenings such as demographics, updates on the pandemic, the economy, etc. Even though the year has not happened yet for this article to improve, their should be more ground already covered and more news covered in the article about Indonesia. Moreover, there is too much weight on politics in this article and has not covered socio-economic updates of the country yet.

Tone and Balance

Yes, the article is neutral and up to date. Since the article is at its starting stage, the bulk of what has to be covered is still missing. There are no viewpoints that are biased or stressed more in this article.

Sources and References

The article is not thorough and written in a bullet pint format which summarizes the events that happened. All the information presented is referenced thorough and are current. Sources come mostly from news and they are diverse. Resources are real time and updated. The links work well.

Organization and Writing Quality

The article is not well written because it does not cover any news but lists what happens to Indonesia during the year. The article does not have grammar or spelling mistakes so far. The article is broken down into the correct 4 major sections, but is too broad.

Images and Media

The article has images of people that was mentioned but not on the events yet. Because there are no paragraphs in the article, there are no stories and images yet. The images adhere to copyright regulations and are laid out correctly and informatively.

Talk Page Discussion

There are no discussions yet about the article. The article is part of the WikiProject: Indonesia.

Overall impressions

The article is still in the start mode, it does not have that much detail into the events covered yet but it comprises a list of events that was supposed to mentioned, though not in detail. The article could be improved vastly with more content on the events mentioned, adding pictures and more research in each of the topics. More context on the other aspects of the country could also be added, compared tot he four main topics which are too broad. The article is still underdeveloped, but is a good start for a comprehensive future article that could potentially cover essential information.