User:Destiny Hartanto/Stephanie Avakian/Samtaliuw Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SamtaliUW


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Destiny Hartanto/Stephanie Avakian/Bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stephanie Avakian

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like what you have drafted so far. It's concise and straight to the point. It seems like you might be able to add more information though. I like how what you have is written from an unbiased perspective. Overall, I think what you have written will mesh well with the article. I would encourage you to reorganize what is already on the page and make it look more aesthetically pleasing.