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Article Review
I chose to evaluate the Wikipedia article on The Fault in Our Stars, because after reading this book many times I thought I would know enough to understand the Wikipedia article and determine if some things on there were false. For the most part, everything on the Wikipedia page was correct and followed this novel. I did not like how short and jumpy the plot summary section was. I felt that it would jump from one part of the story to the next without a good flow between the parts. This page also does not include as much information as I would have expected it to, which probably causes the jumpiness of the plot summary. In the publication history section there is interesting information that I had not known about John Green and the publication behind this novel. The downfall to the publication section was that it brought up another one of his novels, which I found unnecessary. Instead this should be omitted as it does not pertain to The Fault in Our Stars. One of the last sections on this Wikipedia page is about the film adaptations of this novel. I like that they included these as it informs readers that you can find this story in other forms. At the bottom there is a list of the rest of John Green's novels, which I thought was a good idea. This allows readers to find more novels that could be like The Fault in Our Stars.

A Game at Chess Edits
I am on the team that is editing the character list. I was in charge of changing "based on" to "alludes to" in reference to the historical figures the characters alluded to in the play. I was also in charge of editing/adding to the description of the characters from the opening sequence.