User:Destructionuser82/Kirloskar Brothers/Arushilahiri Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Destructionuser82


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Destructionuser82/Kirloskar Brothers
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kirloskar Brothers
 * Kirloskar Brothers

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Though this section was not edited, I looked over the actual Wikipedia article and it seemed to already encompass the historical section that was added.

Content: The content added is relevant to the topic and certainly improved my understanding of the work. I do think it would be interesting to add this information to existing sections such as the major project section which is already in the article. I think this plus the section you already have would give readers a more comprehensive as well as a bulleted list of the projects undertaken by the Kirloskar Brothers and the breadth of their endeavors across various energy frontiers.

Tone: Definitely neutral! I learned a lot and felt like it was a very objective viewpoint throughout.

Sources and References: I think there could be more sources integrated just because you cite a couple in the first paragraph and then it trickles off a bit towards the last three paragraphs which don't have any citations. Even if you were reusing the sources, it would be good to cite them again to make sure the great edits you made won't get taken down.

Organization: The work is very well organized and I feel like could also be distilled into additional bulleted sections (in addition to what you already have) to supplement the existing components of the current article.

Images and Media: I know you didn't add any images but I didn't feel like it was super needed to enhance my understanding of what you wrote. I think that it could be cool to show some of their projects and how they evolved over time.

Overall Impressions: Overall, I learned a lot from your research! I think it would be great to add more sources and supplement some of the existing sections but I believe that won't take too long since what you have is really good already!