User:Deswilliams22/Military psychology/Lancemason7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Deswilliams22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Deswilliams22/Military_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Military psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I am glad that you brought over your contributions into the Sandbox and included your citation.

- I went back and read the original article, and I see where you made your changes. I think that your wording can be changed a little bit in order to flow with the preexisting article a little more.

- I was slightly confused by your citation as well.

- To summarize, I believe that you are doing well and understand the assignment, you can just tweak the structure of your edits and change the citation.