User:Dev1 0302/Propylparaben/Aromatic Thiol Peer Review

General info
JShaw2003, Dev1 0302
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Dev1_0302/Propylparaben&oldid=1183743539
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Propylparaben

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: It doesn't seem like a new lead was added? The original article is so short it doesn't require one, but as you add more sections, creating a lead could be helpful to direct readers.

Content:

I am a little confused by the 'Bibliography' section in the beginning. It looks like a great place to store notes and references but should be edited out before publishing. Under the 'Article Draft', I really like all the hyperlinks you embedded. Great job! However, you consistently seem to have a space between "propyl" and "paraben". Is this correct?

Nice job with the 'Health Risks' section as well, it seems super relevant and up-to-date.

Images and Media:

There seems to be a plan for including a scheme and mechanism for a standard synthesis of propylparaben. I'm looking forward to seeing it!

Overall Impressions:

The level of writing is great for Wikipedia. It is avoids scientific jargon, and I feel an average Joe can understand what you wrote. Great job!