User:Dev1 0302/Propylparaben/Gracelybear Peer Review

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Dev1 0302
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Evaluate the drafted changes
There are a major improvement on the application section with many more usage of Propylparaben. The citation are checked to be relevant and their voicing is neutral. One thing they can improve on is the sequence of each component. Chemical properties should be before Application since readers need to have at least some basic knowledge about the chemical before knowing their application. For some reasons I cannot find the introduction of the lead of Propylparaben, so maybe add that to the sandbox no matter if you are going to edit that or not. Content are up-to-date. There are repeating ideas in the Chemical Properties section, maybe delete your last sentence "Propyl Paraben is an effective antimicrobial, especially against green and blue molds on citrus fruits. Its high solubility in water allows it to be applied to the fruits easily". This should be part of the Application instead of Chemical Properties. Synthesis section looks good as long as the image will be included later. Health risk section uses reliable sources and are relevant to the topic. Each section's length equal to its importance to the subject and nothing is off-topic.There are no conclusion or convincing view point in the whole article. The second paragraph in Application needs at least one citation.