User:Devangjhabakh/Kabir/Aakashpathak1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Devangjhabakh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Devangjhabakh/Filmi qawwali
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kabir
 * Kabir

Evaluate the drafted changes
The text above appears to be well-written and informative. It provides valuable insight into the influence of Ghazal music on Filmi Ghazals and the artistic contributions of Sufi and Urdu artists such as A.R Rahman and Gulzar. I like the use of specific examples, and it helps to support the claims made in the article and adds credibility.

I would add more sources to the article, so it can be accepted by wikipedia's standards for publishing. Overall, great additions though.