User:Devinyousif/McKinney–Vento Homeless Assistance Act/Deasiacohen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

devinyousif


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Devinyousif/McKinney%E2%80%93Vento_Homeless_Assistance_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

McKinney–Vento Homeless Assistance Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead in the article is concise and clearly describes the content of the article. Everything in the article is relevant to the topic, but I'd say that focusing on the steps the piece of legislation went through to pass isn't relevant to the articles topic. One thing I see that isn't included in the wiki page currently is a section for the impacts the bill has had since it's passing. That would be a section I feel would be very important, given the topic that the bill addressed. Maybe there is some studies on how the bill performed in reality after its passing. I clicked through the links in the references and it seems as though they all work, which is great! The article currently doesn't have any images, that may be nice to add to the page as well.