User:Devlin Vong/Agate/KaylaCarleton Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Devlin Vong
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Devlin Vong/Agate

Lead
The lead has not been updated to include added material. The lead is clear and concise, however once it is updated with the edited material I think it will be much more "well rounded".

Content
The content added is very relevant and clear. This article benefits greatly from this information. The information flows well and is very clear.

Tone and Balance
The content is neutral and unbiased. The content is very matter-of-fact with no bias.

Sources and References
All sources are VERY recent (2020) and all links work. Sources are relevant however some are from magazines. No sources are from peer reviewed journals.

Organization
Content is well written and flows well. There are very few grammatical errors. Below are some suggestions for changes.

"working there way inwards" -> "Working their way inwards"

"preexisting rocks" -> "pre-existing rocks"

"Cavities are then filled with silica-rich fluids from the volcanic material form agate" -> "Cavities are then filled in with the silica-rich fluids from volcanic material."

"These variations in layers result in bands of chalcedony often alternate with layers" -> "These variations in layers result in bands of chalcedony which often alternate with layers"

" is often seen detach from its eroding" -> "Is often seen detached from its eroding"

"these sedimentary rock require cavities" -> "these sedimentary rocks require cavities"

" If a silica-rich fluids are able to penetrate" -> " If silica-rich fluids are able to penetrate"

Overall impressions
The article is much more complete with these edits and I believe they are a great addition to this article. The edits describe the formation of Agate in depth.