User:Devyanidhar/Luisa Amanda Espinoza Association of Nicaraguan Women/Sarahestrada Peer Review

General info
(Devyanidhar‎)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Luisa Amanda Espinoza Association of Nicaraguan Women - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Devyanidhar/Luisa Amanda Espinoza Association of Nicaraguan Women - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
From what I have read it is evident that there is newly inserted information added to the article. There is a strong lead in the article so far and the insertion of what the emergence of the AMNLAE refers to is very beneficial in understanding the article. I feel by elaborating more on the controversies it will allow readers to know what stigmas AMNLAE had to persevere from. I also suggest elaborating a bit more on Luisa Amanda so readers can understand why it is that she is the spearhead name of the organization. You could also even strengthen your article by adding an image, if available, of Luisa Amanda. The content you have added overall has improved the quality of the article. I do suggest however to further broaden your article to today's time by including relevant information regarding the group's involvement in present time, so readers are able to see whether they are still an active organization and in what accomplishments they have made since the lasted edition in the article which is 1994. Other than these recommendations the article is off to great start!