User:Devynbrandt/Chamberlain's dwarf salamander/Allybio0258 Peer Review

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Devynbrandt


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Devynbrandt/Chamberlain's dwarf salamander - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Chamberlain's dwarf salamander - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Diet was put as a whole section maybe go in a little bit more detail about the diet or just give examples to give the one sentence a little more description
 * Add bold to the information you changed in your sandbox since the original article was only a lead section everything else will be bolded to help show the changing of it
 * If information is available may want to state who discovered the Salamander in the lead section
 * The abbreviation of the scientific name should be italicized